As a horror writer myself, the author did a bit of creepiness and chill on the two chapters that the author wrote. Creepiness and thrill. Words aren't hard to comprehend. If you are into horror give this a try!
I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is
It's nice. I don't know much about horror, but the setup made by the author was cool and you could read the emotions of the character through the events.
