wasted potential - Reviews

Wan Fang saw the 2 options in front of him, he was at first worried about having to tell others about the technique but after hearing the machine say it will not record anything, he decided to take a risk, after all, others use this machine and if their techniques got leaked it would be a national story.

After she made sure both men saw it, she let her sleeve fall dawn robbing them from that mesmerizing view and waking them from their daze.

"I was actually thinking about that."

"My host is very intelligent! Yay! Yes, I'm not allowed yet to tell you about it but when we're on a really high level then I could tell you. So, host, are you willing or not?"

As he walked across the forest, the dark skies, and forest noises created an eerie atmosphere. Randamu didn't catch any of that, he was too focused on reading the adventures in his favorite novel, Is It Wrong to Microwave Instant Noodles, by Lady 2B on his smartphone. When his friend advised him to pick a smartphone up, Randamu was really uninterested at first. He had spent way too long without one to see the usefulness of a phone, but after discovering web novels, he had almost never let it out of his sight.

"Hee-never thought you would recognize me"

Hoseok and I thought a lot before naming him after all he is our only child, we had to name him the word that represents his meaning in our life and this was J-hope's idea. )

Sabot and Joven both woke up in the middle of the woods and looked at each other and Sabot spoke,

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

So much to do, so much to see

"dan semuany kata Rya"

~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~Good things~Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.Bad things~Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.