War for the World - Reviews

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"jangan pernah mencoba untuk menghindar, kita bicara sore nanti,selesai pertemuan ini"suara itu terdengar seperti berbisik  dari belakang,dan orang yang mengatakan itu berjalan menuju lift dihadapan Kanya,dan seketika lelaki itu tersenyum kepada kanya ketika mereka berhadapan,dan kanya malah memasuki lift sebelah menuju lobby.

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good plot, but there are so many things we dont get explained and he just randomly gets things from the system that we dont know of. and when there is a problem for the MC like build a car, and he just dose it even when he dosent have the necessary tools. and he says he dosent have superpowers yet he can teleport and delete memories (not superpowers but like it) but i like the plot so im gonna continue reading

This is one of the best novels I've read on the platform, the pacing is good, the investment in the main character it gives me is nice, and the tension and build up of the story is amazingly good. All it needs is more chapters and a few grammar fixes here and there for me to call it a 5/5. Good job on this one Author I'm expecting more cool things out of this and from you, keep doing what you're doing ?

Guys, author of this novel here. I would like to explain what you can expect from this book and some bad and good things on the same. Some good points to expect:MC is smart. he is not the smartest person in the room but when he comes out of it, he will be. I have already drafted all the arcs, so there is no confusion on my side about the character development and pacing of the story. So you won't be finding a dead story anytime soon.world building and power system is unique and a bit complicated but once you understand it, it's going to be fun.Some bad things?In the first two volumes, you may find MC a bit annoying in certain situations because of certain reasons you will understand as you read. There will be some prose issue for the first few chapters as I try to adjust to this platform This is my first book so I am still trying to get used to the dialogue structure and smooth flow that as a reader, I would love to see. This is for Pros and Cons. Now, I just want to request my readers to leave comments and rate the novel. I know it's hard to do that for a book with just 2 chapters but I hope you will be able to do that after 10? or maybe 20 chapters? I will be trying to keep this book free for as long as possible do comments really are the motivation I dearly need? you also don't have to worry about criticising my work and putting your opinions.  Hopefully you enjoy my work? Have a good day

I must say the characters are quite well written. The world building is very well done and it keeps you wanting for more. Really love how much detail the author has put into the story doing it just right, neither too much not too less. Will I recommend this yes