Hi. As a an author trying to establish his/her foothold in this vast ocean, you really did a good job. So far the OP ness of the MC is just right up my alley. It is not too much but rather, just the right amount of spice. I hope that you van incorporate some famous phrases or lines from anime characters to add a bit of comical humor. Like adding condiments to your food. Also, I hope the range of skills and powers is not limited to those used for fighting. Like with other MCs being well versed with 2 or 3 other things (the usual alchemy, forging, formation, etc.) All in all. Its a good story to read. I gave 4 on Story Development for now since I cannot grasp yet where the story is leading too (unless you meant the MC to just be OP on the storyline w/ no setbacks). We look forwars to more chapters. It's a damn good read.
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