Volumes1:Secret of Ori - Reviews

"How are you feeling?" He whispered, he likely noticed I had no intention of waking her.

Dex (Agility): 10

Chapters Words: 1,385

[Intelligence]: 450—->650

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

as I walk to the Babel I think I imagine heard the sound

Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised. World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting. Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it

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100% glaze review. I am only here to glaze FailedWriter101 coz he is my pookie and is one of the best authors on this platform. In any case, go read this novel.