VOID RE-BORN - Reviews

Two months later

The metal cross hits the floor, and Francis stairs at it with a look of despair on his face. He looks around the holding cell, then towards the officer. "Officer. I need my gun."

Shi Jieyi really possessed a seductive body. Her sexiness was far higher than that of Yang Meizhen, Huang Wanrong, and Yang Shimin, those mature women. It wasn't because nothing had happened between him and the three women, but rather that Shi Jieyi was his little mother's close friend, and also the wife of his father's subordinate. Adding onto it was the location where they were making love. It brought an especially exciting feeling while doing the deed.

"Thinking".

The story is well-written which shows the skill of the author in writing. It has a solid world background but putting a lot of introduction for the first chapter makes the intro of the story a bit low in the intense aspect. The storyline caught my interest so I hope you can make the story more exciting in the following chapters ahead since there are only 3 chapters currently.

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