Villain Rehabilitator - Reviews

The pilot had glasses, but the remarkable thing is that his face was completely painted in white besides a round red nose and an afro type wig of the same tone, this guy was dressed in a one-piece suit with ruffles and polka dots of different colors. On the other hand, the other crew member was dressed completely with an elephant boot with huge ears in which the little hat attached to his head stands out, it gave him a tender and funny touch.

- Vamos Marill, use Rollout! - Ordenou Crystal, um golpe tipo pedra que aumentava o dano a cada rodada.

Help yourself replied the other, allowing began one of his usual clumsy, but delicious kisses. Crashing his lips together, very desperate, intertwining their tongues when he decided to take control and teach.

kioz:the reason I come to this is school is...

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

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Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

     Here i'm sat in the chair, being forced to wear the clothes that bound our freedom. In this quiet room I just stared at the monitoring glass front of me.

I need more of this.....................

I am the author, I want you to tell me what you think of this beginning of the story, if it should continue, if you see a future, your opinions, what should be improved regarding the way of narrating, if you want more details of the environment, whatever you want. I am all ears in constructive criticism

At chapter 24 right now, and so far, so good. As someone who read your first book, you've definitely improved by a LOT! I love the relationship between Adeline and Enzo and how he's always getting on her nerves one way or the other, but in a cute way? I totally recommend you all give this book a try✨️