Veilfall - Reviews

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catchy synopsis, the plot is amazing such a good story judging from what I was reading so far this is an interesting novel, keep it up, author the grammar is quite okay too.

Great world building and character development and pacing, but needs better translations in the early chapters and consistent statistics in the later chapters, skeleton hell going from 10 million to 20 million, then back to 10 million before becoming 2 milllion, at least post a chapter with army statistics per realm so we know what is a typo and what is pace fixing, overall still an amazing story and I hope it continues to be so

Anyway, Sasha didn't plan to be the greatest mage ever lived anyway. Just learning a few basic spells should do. As for those world-shattering spells like summoning thunderstorms or raining down meteors, if he could learn it, he would, but if he couldn't then it was fine.

I'll let her anticipate it.

"Ready to give up now?"

The treasures she was looking for were at the end of the path. She took a shabby looking bracelet made of thirteen silver beads.

As I wait for it to be my turn on the line I keep thinking about this monster that's been seen. Could there really be a monster like that out there in this world? Heh, why wouldn't it? After all, I've seen I can't deny this any longer. Historio better let me join after saving his ass last time. I've done so many favors for him throughout all the time I've seen him. Before I notice it was already my turn to eat. Wow, I sure can't wait. The "chef" plops a big amount of porridge into a wooden bowl and hands it over without even looking at me. Don't look too excited now.

Origin: "No, in fact, you came at the right time. Sit and I'll start explaining.

But with Rex's strength and the healing ability from the angle, they were able to avoid most of the situation.

"You're the Emperor's critic?" I asked