Veil of Eternal Dusk - Reviews

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"That's not it ..." the Elder whispered as he frowned at his disciple.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Great start to what seems to be an interesting story. Eager for further updates.The world building is very intricate and could be really good when fleshed out further.

99.3 percent bio  0.7 percent way too short and also the author seems to be drop the novel well too much preparation than the actual story like out of 15 chapters there's actually only chapter 1 the author literally hurry world building and end up getting stuck on how to start the story