Vanity's Whim - Reviews

Stupid story, terrible grammar, reading it equal to torturing yourself. Plus mix up storyline even i dont know whats happening. Overall garbage novel. I mean the point of writing a novel is to let your reader understand what you are writing, the emotion behind it but this **** is useless. I try to force myself reading it but i gave up until chapter 56.

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A very good story, it has a lot of potentials. The author wrote it with a good describing and enthusiasm. The story develops greatly, but it needs an experienced editor to make it reached it full potential.

Sesak dan sulit bernafas. Yoona merasa gelisah berdekatan dengan pria itu, ditambah kini jantungnya mulai berdetak tak karuan. Ia tidak bisa terus berada disana. Dengan berat ia mencoba melangkah mundur dan menjauh dari pria itu. Tetapi Sehun menahannya. Pria itu menggenggam tangannya sangat erat. Sehun kembali berdiri dihadapannya, lalu menatapnya dengan tenang.

I frowned at his words. "You did this." I accused.

"Can we please continue this at recess boys?" Mr. Park spat angrily, holding both boys by the shoulders.

He chose to retrieve it and a green pill with white spots on it appeared in front of him. Although the pill looks weird as heck, Ye Han still directly swallowed it without worry, as it came from the deity group.

Xavier just stared at me. "Don't go. Stay home. Make up an excuse."

their stools (it was all three-legged stools in the Beavers' house except

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

I need to get myself away from this place

"You're right it was stupid to worr-" just as Steve was finishing his sentence a loud *Bang* on the side of the ship making it shake before causing red warning lights appeared shining through the jet.