Untitled Mystery - Reviews

"Intriguing though they are, they seem a bit…" The doctor pauses for a moment before continuing "...primitive, the technology seems functional and is unlike anything we use, but it seems worse, these small cylinders produce a much simpler and rougher effect than a basic blood attack or an energy blast" The doctor puts the objects he was studying down and re-approaches the glass containment cell.

  Then the lights that were remaining  merged into one huge ball of energy. Waves of energy could be seen rippling all across  the dreamscape, the once green grass floor was entirely black and grey.  Then the ball moved towards me  I could feel the huge energy coming towards me. Then it did something strange. It condensed growing smaller and smaller until  it turned into a blinding white  dot. It zoomed faster and faster until it had finally  slammed into the area where my belly button would be.

"Okay, If you beat me, I'll even treat you dinner when the result is released" I challenged her.

"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.

Interesting storyline. Like how the characters are brought together. However, I am confused regarding Yukon’s gender as has been referred to as she/he/him/her interchangeably throughout the chapters.

An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.

Man i really love this fan-made novel, for a moment i thought it was mars who got back from hiatus, please even when mars gets back don't stop writing

Gu and the kids are going to the young man