Uncovering Montgomery - Reviews

"I understand, sir. But I'm going to meet my father tomorrow, we haven't met for five years, also I have not been able to contact him for about a year. I am very worried, I won't be able to calm down until I find what happened to him."

I'm slowly getting closure.

"Heheh, that is right. I bought aShadow Dragon's Lacrimawhen I first started my guild. Just in case something like this ever happened," The man's smile grew wider.

Beruntung Fathan tak bertanya lebih jauh. Membuat Jeffry bisa bernapas lega.

   He tried to walk faster as he could, grabbing anything to guide his steps. The voice hissed again, but the sound only brought Sigmund fear that he decided not to ask for who could it be. The thought that he is alone with a total stranger in the darkness brought a new set of fright and panic. He decided to let go of his one hand from the walls and started to jog, to where he does not know.

[Character: Shadow Drifter]

"yes miss? You're late."Mr. Rey said

"YOU'RE COURTING DEATH, YOU LITTLE BASTARD!!!" screamed Xiao Zaihe as he used the weapon that he brought with him.

"Thank goodness their back" said Gremoria as she heaved a sigh of relief. Then she put the clip back on again and her horns once again disappeared.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Only shooting stars break the mold

Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.