World Idea, great ? Timely Updated as well...Rest is meh... I really wanted to read it, but it gets really bad and forced as it goes further... The whole thing with his 'so-called family' was just a painful drama to read that I gave up... If I have to give a suggestion then I would say that the tone of writing in many parts of the story is straight up depressing... Yes, many parts require that sort of writing but overuse of such writing isn't the best...
