Treachery Queen (The Callistra Chronicles #1) - Reviews

"Go faster! Woohoo!" She shouted for Arius to speed up while the entire top half of her body was out the car window.

"A pathetic piece of shit like you thinks they can stop me?" The man licked his sharp fingers. "You evaded me pretty well, but now it's my turn for some fun." He leaped into the sky, the moon dangling behind him. Orik could only hear a heavy thud on his back and cracking noises before his mind shut off.

"Alright, go back to the party and console your drunken colleagues. Make sure you're ready to go by tomorrow. I and the Duke have other business to discuss." Braham urged Raiden out of the room and closed the door behind him.

      "You guys can't do anything right." she barked.

Yes.... Pleas......

-Asylum-

So far, the story has been very fun to read, with vivid descriptions, and amazing characters (very likable), the dialogue is well-written and relatable, and the humour is actually funny and not forced. It might start with ordinary at first but the execution is done very well! Keep readers wondering about and wanting for more. This has a fantastic promise! Feel like dark ver. of Harry Potters hehehe.

I am utterly confused by all the good reviews, I will start with pros and then state my issues.Pros:Writing quality and the effort author put into his system.Cons:I read 29 chapters till now and there's not a single person except MC. I mean there is no conversation at all, it's just MC grinding. With no conversation, I can't give the character design more than two stars as they are literally no characters except MC.My second issue is with the system, as the chapters go on, there is more system than the story. There are some chapters where 80% is system panels and his skills but no story.Update stability is slow.World background is ok, I can't give it much as there's only MC till now. It was fun for first 10 to 15 chapters but got bland as the chapters went on. I hope the author corrects his issues. I am dropping it for now, I will get back to it and do another review if there's any improvement.