Traveler : First Journey - Reviews

Siyempre sinabi ko naman sa inyo hindi ako tatantanan ng memories ko hanggat hindi ko tinatapos.

What a fantasy song!

but never will. Has special ablity

The writing style is mainly many what ifs, followed by a what is. This makes reading it a sludge. Then comes that many situations have what ifs and after three or so paragraphs you have the what actually happened. Lots of word padding. If those ifs were at least entertaining...

Your story is very good. If you post more chapters of the novel in a day then it will be more fun.