The narration of the book is good but it could do a bit of improvement by being a bit interactive with the narration. Well, that's something I have trouble doing myself. Perhaps, breaking the paragraphs that got too long might help for the readers that were reading on the phone. The storyline is very unique and something I have never encountered before but the foundation or introduction of the system at the start of the story feels a little bit not enough. I only read until the first few chapters so it will probably be expanded more in the later chapters. Overall it's a nice read with some new and nice ideas.
