Transmigrating to the 1980s: Making Money Flirting with Men and Raising Babies - Reviews

I was about to sip my wine when someone hit my back. Some of the wine has spilled on the table and on my jeans.

Gohan still carrying the barely conscious Akeno, Rias and Azazel landed beside Asia and a now-healed Kiba and Xenovia. "Asia will you please heal up Akeno, I will go grab Issei, Koneko and Gasper" Gohan laid Akeno down beside Asia as she quickly began to heal her. Gohan using his super speed quickly grabbed Koneko and a still frozen Gasper and took them to where the others were as he quickly went to his last friend.

"Boy, what are you doing here?" Slowly said the mysterious ancient beast in a raspy voice. "I heard a cry coming not far from where I was so I decided to investigate what the noise was." Hao Ren spoke softly but could easily be heard by the ancient beast as his voice echoed in the cavern. As Hao Ren was speaking he was looking everywhere on the beast as he realized that the beast had a deep cut on his stomach and multiple other small cuts scattered around his body making him look like a ferocious bear that had gone through a bloody battle for territory. "You have been seriously injured and need medical attention." Hao Ren commented. After Hao Ren said this he quickly ran out of the cave to go look for herbs he was familiar with.

J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue.J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite.Merci pour le partage !

This need more 5 stars!!! Very  nice story! One of my cup of tea! Everyone should give this a try as well!