Transmigrating to the 1970s to Marry the Factory Director’s Son - Reviews

I'm about 20 chapters in as is my limit for every novel on seeing whether i will continue reading it and gauging its overall quality. I'm really liking the mixed genre of the novel and how there are so many possibilities towards growth and development. everything from Sci-fi to magick seems possible. the MC is lamentable at times though, his personality isn't very believable and can seem extremely immature. for being a prisoner he sure is lighthearted... i know he's only suppose to be 19, and that he no longer has his past memories but seeing such child like thoughts coming from him can grow annoying quickly. (is supposed to have regressed but some how knows how to be witty and talk back to the guards? lacks decorum and common sense but remembers non-sense such as actors and short phrases?)i feel like this novel could be a stellar 5 star novel if the author spent more time rereading the work for mistakes (as most of them can be easily found if the extra time was spent) and if the fourth wall wasn't broken at all. this novel really has the opportunity to be phenomenal if the serious undertones wouldn't keep getting disturbed mid flow. you have this novel that talks about the lives of others as if they're nothing and how rape and murder could happen around any corner, then out of no where (insert half remembered words or phrases. insert breaking the fourth wall.) it just completely lessens the overall quality of the novel. if author chose to rewrite this without so much nonsense and fourth wall breaking this could easily make it to the front page for weeks to come. best of luck to the author though, I'll continue to read it for a while longer to see how the author develops everything...

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Alright review time. I just finished the first 40 chapters and let me tell you... I am absolutely in grossed in the world building of the story. I am going to spend the next couple hours reading the last 20 chapters and I will write more at that point but let me tell you the story is funny, witty, and a good overall fun time. I think it’s worth your time to read it I think you will enjoy it and all I can say is I am more than likely going to be daily reviewing this just like 48 hours in a dayufffc.

Im putting 5 stars just for the idea of this novel. And looking at the few coments i read i don't think i will change this review after reading this.

It's slice of life, eastern style urban fantasy, wuxia lite in a modern setting. It's surprisingly good and wholesome to read. Highly recommend it.

it was great untie pest came along after that  it was a complete downfall for me .................................................................................  

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For the love of god I’ll take this. Y’all mught complain about copy & paste cultivation novels but I quite enjoy them SO IF YOU COULD PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF F#^^*]* GOD NOT COMPLETELY DESTROY THIS FOR ME. YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET A REGULAR CULTIVATION NOVEL ON HERE NOW????

Not gonna lie, I really like this novel, but the prices for the chapters killed it for me... Every chapter has been 18 to 20 coins or 2 fast passes, too expensive.

The writing is great. The pacing could benefit from some improvement, but it’s mostly good.Story development however takes a toll on the writing. So far the story is a shallow description of her day-to-day activities. No much detail is presented besides a plain "she had some trouble, but overcame it".This also makes the character feel a bit shallow, because it limits the possibility of understanding and relating to her on a deeper level.World background is well done, considering the writing style and story depth. It’s enough to further explore and contextualize the world.It would be great to have more details on Emily's daily life.Keep up the good work, author!

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