Transmigrated Story: Transforming the Fate of a Capital Tycoon - Reviews

"yes, i've learned it before somewhere.." i replied. they all looked at each other in shock. "mind if i ask... are you a mermaid?" i asked them. "first, should we trust you?" the guy with the pink hair said. i turned to him, "you guys saved my life! i could not thank you enough, i guess you can trust me.." i said. "okay then, we are a merman not a mermaid." the one said with blonde hair.

"Name?" Said an old looking woman at the entrance of the gates.

In this world my name is Shao Tien he is 16 years old he sell vegetables in the market, he doesn't have parents they're are killed by bandits who tried to robbed their village he was 8 years old at that time.

"hmmmm okay, then Lucy thanks if you need help just ask me, i will help"

So much to do, so much to see

the four original maidens

it starts off great but starts to get worse. MC feels weaker over time. Author doesn't finish some plot points or leaves the states of relationships for ages and ages. Author shows early on that it can be annoying to be shown something that either you can't use or is taken away with the aranus soul. and the. starts to do that over and over. this just makes it frustrating to read. also any chapters that are announcements or clarifications that arnt part of the story should not be paid chapters.

Completely unreadible. The grammer and translation is bottom of the barrel bad.

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