I have to talk about the dialogue in this chapter because it's genuinely impressive how natural it all sounds.
Let me start with Lin Yiran and her second sister-in-law. The conversation about opening a clothing shop feels like something that would actually happen between two women in 1970s rural China. The sister-in-law says, "How could that be? Clothing shops are all state-run, and you need ration coupons for fabric." This isn't exposition dumped on the reader—it's a natural response that reveals the economic reality of the time. And Lin Yiran's reply, "Maybe you'll have the chance one day," shows her forward-thinking nature without making her seem anachronistic.
The dialogue between Xiao Ziyi and Lin Yiran under the tree is also spot-on. She asks if he wants fruit, he says yes, she tosses it down, he catches it. The exchange is minimal but it reveals everything about their dynamic. She's polite but not overly formal. He's warm but not effusive. When she says "Thank you… I can't understand it at all. You're amazing," the hesitation in her speech feels real—she's genuinely impressed but also slightly embarrassed that she can't comprehend his advanced text.
But the dialogue that stood out most to me was from Jiang Lanru. When she says to Xiao Ziyi, "Brother Xiao, I love reading as well. Could you lend me your book?" and he replies, "You wouldn't understand it," the power dynamic is crystal clear. She's performing interest in reading to get closer to him. He's rejecting her politely but firmly. And then Liu Qinggang's response—"Brother Xiao's books really are difficult to understand. He's just too brilliant"—is comedy gold because he has no idea what's actually happening.
The author also does something really clever with the narrative voice. When Lin Yiran is with her family, the narration is warm and grounded. When we're in Xiao Ziyi's head, it's more analytical and restrained. This difference in voice helps us understand each character's inner world without needing long internal monologues.
Even the minor characters have distinct voices. Uncle Chen at the factory sounds like a friendly but gossipy older man. Huang Tonghai sounds like a young worker sharing inside information with a friend. The village loudspeaker calling everyone to work—that single detail establishes the collective nature of village life without a word of exposition.
The dialogue never feels like it's serving the plot. It feels like these are real people having real conversations, and the plot emerges naturally from their interactions.