Can we just take a moment to appreciate how well-written the dialogue is in this section? Like, I can tell who's speaking without looking at the names, and that's not always the case in novels I read.
Xu Yao's voice is sharp, practical, and laced with this dry humor that comes from surviving hard things. When she tells Xu Jia'an her standards for a husband—"tall, rich, handsome, owns a car and a house, and both parents dead"—it's funny but it's ALSO a genuine expression of her worldview. She's not being sarcastic for comedy's sake; she's being honest about how impossible it is to find a good man, and she's deflecting the real question (will she remarry?) with humor. That's a very specific character voice, and it's consistent.
Xu Gang is another standout. His dialogue is minimal but each line carries weight. "I ain't dead yet! You think you can bully my sister? Next time—woman or not—I'll beat the crap out of you." That's not just a threat; that's a character moment. This boy who was bullied for his face, who works hard, who loves his sister fiercely—he speaks in short, hard sentences because that's how he protects himself and his family. The brick-splitting scene doesn't need dialogue at all; the action speaks for him.
Then there's Aunt Wu, who is honestly one of my favorite side characters now. "Look at your An'an, so skinny—I've already thickened my skin enough to steal his nutrition, how could I take your chicken too?" This is such a specific, colorful way of speaking. She's warm but also proud, generous but not charitable in a way that makes you feel small. She pays five yuan for a chicken that's worth 4.5 and calls it conscience. That's a whole philosophy in one sentence.
Li Wenhui's dialogue is chilling in its casual cruelty. "Maybe you should just adopt Jia'an instead. That way Xu Yao won't have a burden holding her back from marrying again, right?" She says this half-joking, which makes it worse. It's the kind of thing a person says while smiling, testing the waters to see how much cruelty they can get away with. And then her matchmaking proposal—"My family has a younger brother. Proper city household registration, too. He's picky and still unmarried. I think you're acceptable"—is so casually insulting that it's almost comedic. Calling a woman "acceptable" like she's a used appliance.
Han Gaoyi's dialogue is where the comedy really shines. The drunk friend trope is always fun, but this version is particular because he's genuinely sweet despite being a bit of a fool. "If I ever see that dog, I'll kill him with my own hands!" and then immediately after, Ji Changyu is the one who's actually angry about Xu Yao. The irony is delicious.
And Ji Changyu—his dialogue is sparse, which is perfect for his character. He doesn't talk much, but when he does, it lands. "Who did you say you want to win over?" said after shattering a wine glass. Three lines of dialogue and a sound effect, and you feel the entire room temperature drop. Later: "Stop meddling. If you drive away my wife and son, you'll regret it." He says this while his mother has no idea he has a wife and son, which means he's either talking to himself or he's already imagining a future with Xu Yao so vividly that he can't help but speak it aloud. Either reading is valid and both are wonderful.
The narrative voice itself is also worth discussing. It's close third person, bouncing between Xu Yao and Ji Changyu's perspectives, and it has this warm, slightly wry tone that fits the story perfectly. It's not overly literary or pretentious—it's the kind of narration that feels like a friend telling you a story. "The villain's son was like a sponge, soaking up knowledge." That's the narrator chiming in with an opinion, and it's delightful.
One thing I want to flag: Xu Jia'an's dialogue is carefully calibrated to sound like a child who is smarter than his years but still a child. "Mom, will you get married?" asked quietly after his dramatic declaration that he'll never marry. The pause, the shift in tone—it's perfect. He's using his childishness as a weapon, and he knows it.