If I were to rate this myself, I'd say the writing quality is high. You won’t find mistakes—well, on the off chance you do, feel free to leave a comment. I’m only human, after all! I’ve worked hard to craft a world filled with danger, monsters, and realms waiting to be explored. To avoid overwhelming info dumps, I’ve woven lore into skill descriptions, artifact explanations, and quests. The system the main character gains isn’t your typical overpowered gift—it comes with dangerous abilities that don’t make his life easier. While he does get a golden finger, he has to work hard to survive and thrive. I didn’t want a protagonist who just gets handed his power. The system itself has a deep origin, and its purpose and how he got it will be revealed as the story progresses. For those wondering: there will be no NTR or Yuri, or anything unwholesome. The answer is simply no. Expect plenty of fantasy elements like different races, dungeons, otherworlds, dragons, and much more! If you like the story, please leave a review—any kind is appreciated.Minor Spoiler Warning (Proceed at Your Own Peril) Some readers wondered why the MC didn’t just feed his shadow with monster flesh by venturing beyond the barrier. In chapter three, I subtly explained why: the forest beyond the barrier isn’t a place for low-level monsters—it’s a death zone called the Evil Forest. The first monster out there would kill him in seconds. Venturing out was never an option. The lore of this dangerous zone will be explored as the story unfolds.If you have any questions, feel free to hit me up on Discord. I’m still working on creating a proper server, so any help would be greatly appreciated! ?????? Thanks for reading! Don’t forget to leave a review and share your thoughts.
