Let me just say this: the pacing in the first chapter is absolutely ruthless and I am here for it. We go from mundane newsroom work—deadlines, equipment, intern gossip—straight into the most emotionally devastating reunion possible in under 2000 words. No warm-up, no slow burn. Just: she's clipping a mic, looks up, and her entire past is standing in front of her. That's incredible economy of storytelling. The author doesn't waste a single beat. Xia Qing's fangirling provides comic relief that actually works because it contrasts with Wen Yan's internal earthquake. Then the phone drop, the hallway confrontation, the 'I don't know her' lie—each moment builds on the last like dominoes. Chapter 2 shifts gears into the dinner scene, which is a masterclass in social tension. Every line of dialogue carries double meaning. The wine toast, the hand-wiping, Jiang Wantang's failed flirtation—these aren't filler, they're landmines. The chapter ends mid-toast with Qi Siye pressing his hand over hers, and I need to know what happens next immediately. One concern: the exposition dump about the Xie family (patriarch, eldest son, internet company) feels slightly convenient, but it's delivered through Wen Yan's thoughts so it works. The structure is tight. I'm not complaining.