Review @ 85 ch:
It is a slow easy going novel that talkes about a dad raising his kids, also the growth speed of the kids is a little stalled, it is expected since the world building itself is slow. The daughters actions are not that lame as it is stated. It is quite a good read that can really scale into a really nice thing to read.
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The things that causes the story to have potential are the following:
System, daughters physic, who is their mother, and how will these kids develop.
Things that are missing:
Mc background, what he did when he arrived, what are the bounties he got, what is his physic.