There is Something Strange - Reviews

Monokuma had his back towards the students. He turned his head to look at them, but a devilish smile was present. "Rules you say?" He said with a sullen tone. All of a sudden, the atmosphere felt heavy. The grin that was on the bear's face depicted evil and murderous intent. Most of the students were aware of his expressions, though they weren't expecting the next thing Monokuma said. "Upupupupu...the rules? Simple, you must kill each other to survive."

DEF: 2,049

"That party again?" asked one man.

I said with a slightly evil grin as I see Rias passed out…I wanted her to last a little longer…but I asked the girls, who are already lustful and horny from the service I just gave Rias as I let them all slurp on my cock to be clean as we all ended up taking bathes together while I came inside all of them but Rias, as per our agreement, but I did "carve" something on her body that she will find interesting once she wakes up

"What are you looking at?! Come on now." Mom got pass through me while still dragging them as if like they were like pillows.

Uncle lee suddenly went upstairs

It gives what it promises, the only things I would change would be given the characters a little more dept, some backstory or flaws, and show some images of them so we can get a better idea of how they look given that they descriptions are good but not complex, just my opinion though

Now this is a whole new world you have taken us into, but am so loving it ? iIlove the world you created and this system hoo God i you everything ? keep up my dear author ??????? waiting for more and more