The World's No. 1 Sword. - Reviews

It seemed her father heard her voice this time because he looked at her direction. Even from far she could see the surprised expression on his face. He withdrew from getting on the train and turned back.

Bai Mingluan hummed.

He could instantly feel that his body got a lot stronger than before. If before he could punch with 30 pounds of weight, then as of now, he can punch with 80 pounds of weight, which is over double from before, and that is only with one rank increase, and it is still at the second lowest rank.

"Yes"

"I'm not leaving." Wanda stated firmly, daring him to challenge her.

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Eh just extremely awkward and off putting of all things a Isekai into a magical fantasy DnD style world but he's a Sun Elf whose a wannabe Cowboy and Sun Elf's being Natural race supremacitst and he's awkwardly trying to not be a supremacist and lash out and any and everyone... and changes his voice to Johnny Cash's.... it's good grammer wise but everything else is just a jumbled mess of hot garbage that just doesn't feel like a coherent fic feels like a 12 year old wrote it after thinking up Awkwardly Snobby Elf Cowboy as a daydream.... if you don't mind the awkwardness of that duality I guess it could be decent but as is absolutely not worth the time wasted reading all but the last chapter currently released kinda wish I could forget this last 10-20-ish minutes just... Why? Quality of writing is the only saving grace for this fic IMO 1.8/5 and the only bcause QoW is 5/5 the rest 1/5 imo

it's been great so far, reading to 5-7 chapsthe story is captivating and the world building too!starting from a business MC into the powerful human. in the whole world..though i gotta say it's bit cliche, but I'll be looking on where this be going!keep going Author!

A breathe of fresh airA novel story that’s kinda weirdBut the characters really carry the plotNo cliches here