The world of dragons - Reviews

Plot armor every chapter ?..............................................................................................................?

Do not take it into your heart so much. I hope it will help you to progress. Thb its boring, so much useless info something about villages, virus+virus, zombie 1-4 and four system chaps.. I think you should focus more on story dev to graduate it and these chaps point it in 2-4 sentences. Tons of system in novels. Your like trial version, provided info and bye.. nothing playfull, funny.. Its like system how are u? Yes. "o__o". I believe you can do better because i voted for this novel. Add some missions, rewards etc be more creative.

(It's from my perspective so if you disagree well i can't do **** to change your mind... can i? There will be some spoilers so........)Even tho i like the fishing thing in the novel it turns into Cultivation novel.Where he goes to from village to town. And there he joins a stupid school that everyone looks down on but was most powerful one.At school he finds out his talent isn't so great after all. It happens in like 140-50th chapter.

well written cant wait to see more content thanks

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Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!

Wow 3 of novels I put in library have been picked for trial read that's new just hope there as good as I think. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrreeeeeeeeeeerxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xpppppppppppppppppppp

A lame novel with idiotic characters lameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Some were in Office on the the top floor of the Fifty floor buliding A Man Stood near the Window and looking at the sky .His Face had no Facial Expression at all on This Handsome looking face with prefect Jaw line and facial look Blackbrown hair with, Black like a Deep Hole Eyes ,Slim fit body with Six pack ab.Wearing black Texudo And A Little Simle on his Face as if remembering someone. Suddenly there was a Knock on the door was heard. The Simle on the person face disspare in second and Replaced with Aloof Face And Commanded "Come In". The door opened and A many in His Twenty's enter and reported something which Changed the person facial expressions from Aloof to Sullen and Excitement Mix emotion. For above a minute or so no word came from his mouth.So the man who just entered the room turned around and was going to live the Person Who he reported early for some space as he moved the door Handle to open the door he heard the person calling him "Shiv".So he turned around and said"Yes Boss".The person said after resving answer From the his assistant which is more than a friend."Why did this had to happen Us what did she or me Do expect then loving each other.You say that every person life is densited then was that fatefully night was in destine of My and Maheks life " Shiv Tried speak but was cut by him saying"Even if it was was it complesire For her to forget the Two year of her life where we both meet and fell in love And Why my destine has this all bad thing Writting Why Shiv answer me know she Finally awake and I have already cleared all danger that was not allowing us to stay together. But she know don't even remember me Why " As He finished speaking tears Roll down his Face.At that point Shiva felt Helpless and had no answer to this Best friend and Boss. He could only see him Cry the Most famous Aloof Business Man The Vedhant Parekh The Multi Billionaire. But He was Not supprised see him Cry because he only show his weak side to only him,This family and the one and only person or must say girl other then this mom or sister His love for Whom He can take any  Risk Another Aloof Chill Aura person but Beautiful Features C.E.O of Mehta and Group One and only Mahek Mehta who create a place in this Person heart which is of Stone .Not only with beauty but attidue and arua which she has.

pag highschool ka ganyan lang ang standard mo hahaha. depende sa level ng maturity mo.