The World Devouring System - Reviews

Dong Xian thought for a while and determined that Zhao Feng was indeed right. Still, that left a question. "Then how are you the top dog among the other sects and clans?" Zhao Feng looked at Dong Xian like an idiot. "Isn't it obvious? By kicking the sect leader's butt! No Ascendant Stage expert would come down and confront us anyway!"

"you walked on someone that was changing." I look at him as I wondered what on earth he was doing while he was in there.

The wings on Alex's hands burned to a crisp and he threw the ashes to the ground.

Un écran appuru avec les données suivantes

AN: this is to show that I did not stop this fic. It is just that my co-writer that was responsible for this arc had his laptop busted and is going to buy a new one. Until he does he can't write and we had agreed that he would do this arc. This next chapter was to be released later but considering that I fear you all might forget this fic otherwise I am releasing this one now. This is to show things from Lelouch's perspective, do remember that he is just a 8 years old boy who was raised hearing that he was a genius by everyone.

fantastic re write can see my interest within this book, great work author

Hi, Just writing a Review to Encourage The Author to Make EVEN More Incredible Chapters, and Increasing the Rating and Number of Reviews I Guess.

I'll say tis is an interesting story with some good point, but with some potential i can say if it improves by the time, since it's my own evaluation so read ur self nd find how it is, afterall "every person has different face, voice, behaviour, IQ, nd taste" so not my prob...i ur friendly wanderer friend peace?✌️

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I've finally updated and corrected the errors in chapter 1 so it's better now albeit shorter. so do well to go read it again

I’m going to leave me a review because I love this book so much it has been a passion of mine to write and I will keep going until the end! I hope you give it a read you can always read my books independent of each other. But the other one happened first. Enjoy! ☺️

so far, as this is a new story I do not see any official character designs, nor are there enough chapters to rate it on 'stability of updates' but this novel feels authentic, like there is a REAL passion behind this writer and their story, Congrats on your first 1k views :)