one thing about this novel that bother me is the updates cant you like update 2 chapter a day? But the rest is wonderful specially the character description and the details to the surroundings
The first chapter was kindaa ok as it was only one chapter but i can say this has a lot of potential. and also i like the part where he is goona give the mc powers of other charecters
A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement
