"You say that you care about me… but yet you don't even show that you do…" he broke loose from my grasp. He walked towards the cupboard in search of his shoes.
At first, I thought it was a fantasy novel from the book cover but it wasn't, as I read I saw well character design and good dialogue writing, so keep going!
An interesting book. Also amusing at times. Really funny. The only problem I have is that the author has only updated one chapter. HEAR ME AUTHOR, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!?
Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow ?
