The Villain Left the Sect at the Beginning, Now They Regret It - Reviews

I nodded with Yosaku, and Johnny come to her house.

"Koneko, the reason why I am the only one who will be training you is due to you being more of a hand to hand combat fighter, I will be teaching you how to fight better and smarter… especially after what happened to you today against Tanine..." Gohan could see the look of regret in the girl's eyes,Koneko is better than what she displayed today… something is playing on her mind.

"Koneko!" Asia hugged her tightly, "I was so worried about you!"

Well story seems to be good but since I don't like 2 mc setting and someone else having harem other than mc, I will not buy paid chaps iykyk. Anyway if you don't mind 2mc with each having their own harem then give it a try.

I won't comment on the story as I've only read half of the first chapter. Instead I'd like to offer some advice. I was taken aback by the writing quality which seemed more like a proper book than a webnovel story but that's also the issue. The writing quality is too good/different for this website that most people won't actually want to read it so I recommend instead posting the story to RR where readers are more used to and willing to read this level of writing otherwise I believe this story will be buried and forgotten on this website.