The Victims⦻ - Reviews

My world's on fire, how about yours?

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

My brutally honest review Firstly not engaging at allSecondly protagonist personality has no flare as such most readers wouldn't want to continue the storyThirdly story line could be way betterFourthly unlike all the other books I have extensively criticized calling em trash this was the only one I couldn't finish And lastly I am purposely picking faults as such it probably deserves a way higher rating than am giving it, given that there is no such thing as a perfectly written book with no flaws...... Well maybe there is ..... nevertheless that's just my philosophy

So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's. pro- It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it.- the action is ok.con- the grammar is horrible.- obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse.- The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying.- Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic.- The system and leveling lacks detail.- The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening. - Again things happen just to happen.. I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5

Im a little confused, is this a continuation of terra nova online or something else? I have only read guildmaster and then like a little over half of vampire novel. So can I read this without missing out or feeling like I am missing something?