The Varaksha’s Curse - Reviews

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Fu Hongxue berkata, "Ya. Aku pergi."

"Yeah," I nodded, it wasn't exactly a lie. Seyong hadn't really bothered me in the last day and a half, that might have something to do with not being around him but I still didn't lie.

But this girl is different.

"Ha~~h... Need to freshen up and get ready for training, have to see what that old guy has planed for me." Said Flint yawning.

I mostly like the character that is included in the story....✨

I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the  your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..

Well, the story is a good one, looking forward to reading more chapters. I highly recommend.

What's up guys, this is my first attempt in writing a web novel. I'm open to any feedback so that I can improve my story as it progresses.hope you guys enjoy Ryo's journey.