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He was my first love . And he is my husband now . But we had a not so planned wedding. (Okay I suck at the description as this is my first time. But please give my story a chance ) Highest rated #schoolfriends - 1 #pune -1 #unplanned - 2 #wedding - 4 #wattpadindia - 188 #wattpad - 140 #firstloves - 34 #india -24 #shy - 18 #friendstolovers - 5 #marriage - 133 #lovestory - 348 #desi - 19 #plussize - 133 #family - 185 #childhood - 18

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This made me cry, first chapter had me hooked, the writing was good and I had so many questions I just had to keep reading. Loved the first world setting and what it he had to go through. Thought I found another great read to go with my favorites. Then all of a sudden it turns to boring cliché cultivation novel. It almost seems he just gave up and copy and paste form another novel about a cultivation god reborn in modern world. Really sad to have to drop this
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This is a comedy that has some smiles among the endless tries. Unfortunately the MC is a dumba**, the story is tiresome, the comedy is not really that fun, etc. Can be readable for a little while, but it should be difficult to read far into this novel.
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World of cultivation, strong prey weak and our main character got a deal in his dantain. He got system and many other powerful resource. This little bad since many character is given so much resources from start but if author explain it well then it will be a good novel
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Great book, great story, excellent writing, keeps you stuck to it till all the spirit stones are exhausted!!I loved the lead characters a lot...i could relate to them easily!
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The overall story is a bit different from regular reincarnation video game stories. The protagonist is totally OP. I do not really understand the logic of the GM considering his weapon as legit. The whole attachment should not exist in the timeline in the first . We need to find a sensible reason for the existence  of the weapon. The chapters are short in the beginning but eventually increase in length which is a good thing. The most disappointing part was to discontinue this story and create another book with a more detailed story line. I am disappointed because the new book did not catch up to this one yet.
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it has a great potential and storyline. But i think each chapter is too short. i hope author would make changes to this
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