The Unloved Luna: Humilated by My Future Daughter-in-law - Reviews

For a second, Stevhen blinked twice as he quickly raised his arms and slapped Cole's head.

"Zane."

"Thank you very much for your help Mr. Cullen." I said in a sarcastic tone.

Effects: Better regeneration energy elementary wood, greater connection with plants.

"No"

"hhhmph" Lucy just pouting and pretent to be angry again, Lucio only can laug at her.and then after she done with her pouting season they began to chat like normal until Lucio arrived at his stop, then he wait for bus number 21 to go to his school

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

So much to do, so much to see

"Don't worry, I will take care of you. You are safe now. What's your name?" she asked the boy.

Kenji is the type of race that resemibles me, of course because he has wings, but what is unique is, his accent and distinctive language, Kenji always uses the -desu word to end each sentence.

Okay,first of all.Let me tell you this.I came from his tiktok page.And...it's not a bad story at all.Some people might have a bit of trouble reading it because of the grammatical inaccuracies but,I don't think it's severe enough to be a 'bad' story.I am from a third world country and english is my third language so I also have trouble with spelling and composition a lot and take too much time writing a chapter.Well,I hope you do become a pro writer and...you should continue writing this.Webnovel is a platform where as long as you pump out content you will get attention.Though I do want to make a suggestion to pick out a different vibe for a story if you write another one.Also,for better chances of being successful and being contracted add less R18 jokes.Don't make it totally stale though.Peace out