The twisted fate~a journey of love 18+( Reverse Harem) - Reviews

It's just a bad piece of literature (if one can call it that). The grammar, the tenses, and the sentence structure is bad and needs revising. The objectification of women is bad and a dumb choice.The logic behind the system and the different things in the world is flawed and inconsistent. E.g guns made pre-WW2 era works but any post-WW2 gun does, somehow, not work. (+The systems guns work?) The principle behind them is pretty much the same for the two sides. The units of measurement is not well planned. In other words, I do not recommend you read this novel if you don't want to lose brain cells.

Okay okay I've only read to chapter 9 but I can tell this is better than both of the VR novels currently in the top 40. The grammar is impeccable. The MC isn't dull, I haven't gotten to the side characters yet but I have complete faith in the author. Please don't drip this novel Mr. Author I'll do the best I can to get this noticed. I'm in it for the long haul. ?

I would like to make a protest for more chapters!! The development was so good I got impatient to look for more. Author, my friend, update soon please!

I have read the first 60 trial read chapters, and inhave to admit the novel has great promise and have the potential to become a top novel.

hey author.   ............................................................................ you alive?  .....................................

I love this novel. Keith's character is great. He is smart and knows how to use the knowledge he has. The depictions of harem characters are good. Each one feels amazing. There is a writing style that conveys the emotions that are formed. Only the broadcast speed is a little slow. I hope the author publishes it faster. I can't wait for the episodes.

a perfect story telling ,the story building is so attractive

New translator? The previous translator is mistycloud ?. Same translator with a novel genius doctor black belly miss. I’ve been waiting to continue to read this novel so long. I hope the translator will give mass release chapters, but 9 chapters????? I’ve read more hundreds chapters. Till when I can wait to continue to read the story?

'Well, there goes my way out.'

"So we are dealing with a Wizard above level 6. Only such a person could cast a spell of absolute". I theorize.

Then Mom pinched their ear and dragged them to me.

"Thank you very much, Uncle."