The idea of the story is good. Though there are some inconsistent wordings, like silver sigil then silver shards, as well as the dating of events. the first few chapterr started with August 11 to 13, then after the MC's outside adventure, the next day was dated as august 11 again. At first, I thought it was double posted, but then the Second August 11 was stated as the 2nd week of college.
