the tempest brother cosing havic with there nation in tensura - Reviews

I don't like this new "locked chapters ordering" so I gave this 1 star. Simply because I'm afraid that if this monetization model performed better, they'll start putting this new order of "locked chapters" model on ALL the new novels, and I'm not rich enough to survive that.at the point in time of this review, the ordering is roughly:-chapter 1-3 free-chapter 4-20 locked-chapter 21-36 free-chapter 37-40 locked

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My brain cells are f*cking dying. The grammar errors,  the plot,  the mc, everything in this novel can cause brain cancer.  I can understand the general plot but sometimes you won't understand what's happening in between. We have a 4 yo mc which for me really killed off everything. The story is kinda stupid, it's like it's been written by a 10 yo and cmon what on the actual f*ck is boomx300000. "Best sfx ever." Bloody hell the harem members are dumb especially the girl with the eat me I'll kill u system. I don't know what's wrong but she really pisses me off. The fights are OK the power ups are OK but overall I lost my mental capacity to think. And in all honesty reading this is like a hate-f*ucking session almost like r*pe. I am warning future readers, if you want a serious story gtfo of here cause this ain't for u. Well that's all I have to say and I'm really sorry dear author I just really need to vent my frustrations hope you understand that we have different views and opinions but still thank you for making this story possible.

Let me just say, I LOVE Rowan. He is so sweet and I want him to be happy. Wren is perfect for him. He is HOT. I love that he is dangerous to everyone else, but has a soft side he only shows his Caretaker. I can't wait for things to get spicy. The writing is amazing. Very easy to read and engaging. Author, thank you for sharing this story and please keep up the good work!

"It's your favorite cake. Let's eat," Charles said with a smile.

Arata was confused as he looked at Visha, who had a look of astonishment. He squinted his eyes as he looked at Eamon.

"What?!" I exclaimed in surprise, seeing a floating screen "Is this the infamous system I've read about in fiction novels?!" I asked

Ohgi in the original series did not impressive me very much. Or at least his characterization didn't. He was indecisive as all hell and clearly way over his head in a lot of situations. This was especially evident in the latter part of the second season. Again, problematic/lack of character development that was prevalent throughout the entire series can probably be blamed here. But overall he wasn't an entirely impressive character. And then there was that really contrived Villetta subplot with him. How the blazes do you not recognize the second in command of the Purist faction.

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Bro, nice story. Is it Chinese novel? ,................................................................................................................................