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The Tale of The Fallen Primordial - Reviews

The Tale of The Fallen Primordial
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LordofEndless's avatar
November 19,2024
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I love noir, the twin dynamic is beauty, I also love the exposition, but can you add a bit more details to the characters so we can better visualize them, like their outfit and looks
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Firstanddotstealer's avatar
November 19,2024
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can you add images to help visualize it more in other chapters?
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Mehh8602873's avatar
November 19,2024
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the prologue to me is the best part, I love how you took time to explain the verse and how everything came into existence
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