THE SWEETNESS OF TOMORROW - Reviews

THE SWEETNESS OF TOMORROW
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"It's been awhile since I last saw you. How long has it been? I forget. Nine years, right?" Aaron said, laughingly. A bitterness that didn't exist before, surfaced in his tone.
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But right now, could she handle the possible retaliation from Ning Kuo and Regal Entertainment? No, she wouldn't. It would be easy for them to drag her through the mud once more with life-ruining rumors. They could release nude photos that, even if they were fake, people would still buy. They could find her parents and make life difficult for them.
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"MIKAEL!"
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Writing quality isn't bad, but after many chapters where the author repeats paragraphs sometimes even twice in the same chapter is questionable as it is frequent even withing first 70 chapters.   I will admit author does a good job with gender pronouns so that is a plus.  Character development is lack luster as author makes the MC ask the blatantly obvious stupid question like a child so they can explain something easy to understand. (my example "That is a jumping frog".  "what is that?"  "it is a frog that jumps".    All it takes is a few sentences written differently to add IQ points to the MC..  CH 70 - 71 this is painfully demonstrated.This causes the story development to just degrade any confidence in the MC.

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