Easily the highest quality story on Webnovel. I find it hard to find anything really bad about in. If you dont like harem or r18 scenes then it might not be for you. But I have to say, until now, the Harem has not been messed up, which is an achievement of its own. Great comedy. Great characters. Great story. Very much hoping this will go into the 1000 chapters.
This novel is not what I expected, and I've only read 10 chapters (which also means this review doesn't have any spoilers past what could already be inferred from the synopsis). First off, writing quality - the language is sophisticated but readable, with vivid descriptions. It has a natural flow that quite literally had me raving out loud about it - I'm a sucker for good quality writing. Story development, I can't say much about for the time being, similar with update consistency, but I've given them 5 stars because if this novel continues as it is now, it is absolutely deserving of them. The character design struck me from the first chapter, because it feels genuine! The dialogue is natural, the actions seem as though a real person might make them. Sure, there's occasionaly what I'd consider a 'movie action' which is slightly more... cheesy than what would be real, but the most important thing is that it doesn't break the immersion. Finally, the world building is disgustingly good. Mixture of ancient and modern settings... this is an incredible story! I'm honestly enamoured by it, so kudos to the author! You've done amazing
The hook is the MC is an alchemy emperor. So when he gets that cheat, I'm fine with it.BUT THE FIRST THING THAT HAPPENS WITH HIS CHEAT?"Hey look the strongest martial artist manual ever, I'm going to be like that guy now!" So if anybody was expect somebody uses alchemy to ok overcome issues basic wuxia MCs would use brute strength with, this is not for you. And if you looking for an interesting book with a new take or interesting presentation this is not for you.
so far pretty good, story feels smooth and easy to read, events make "sense" and dont feel rushed, so grammar and writing is good mc feels intelligent and quick to adapt, so please keept it that way.id also really like to see a zombie survival novel with a necromancer, but thats just a suggestiongood story so far
Muito bom! continue assim, autor-san! melhor livro! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa muito bom!
OMG! SUCH AN AMAZING NOVEL! Add it to collection, VOTE WITH YOUR POWER STONES! THE author deserves more hype. ???? Please author Sama make more Chapters please ????
Just here to ask for all the boys (me included) that wonders if he starts at the game release or after the game has already been released? I hate when MC starts after the game has realeased.....Also I see the R-18 tag, but no romance and no harem tag. Does that mean it will only be casual flings/one night stand? As long as it's not solo romance, ntr, or girls that have been raped you have my interests.asking here because reviews are a nice place to find answers, instead of having to read the comments on chapter 1.
i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go :- as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel .- nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm.- Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree .i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment ??
