the story of the banished side

this is a fan made novel of the " the story of the banished " web novel .In the real story Est was banished from his party for being weak but later get stronger too but their are many plot holes in the real story like , after Est leaving Athena ( party leader and Est's childhood friend ) became weak without his enchantment magic but the party did not consider and helped to level up and making Athena ship with an old man Daru ( rear guard of the party ). There's a manga too of this web novel read it and you understand why this story is so fucked up and then pls read my web novel too. This is my first time writing a web novel so pls support me . There can be grammar and spelling mistakes too .