It took me a little bit to get into the story, but I've always been like that. I tend to read books more on their plot line and ideas, since I know that some people struggle with grammar (especially when English isn't their native language). However, the grammar in this book definitely improves over time, and this is probably one of my favorite books out of all the ones I've read. I do like how there's quite a few girls in the story that are able to survive, because I kind of hate a lot of stereotypes, including how only guys can survive anything and that women are weak and need a guy to survive, but this story isn't like that at all, and the characters seem a lot more balanced out and realistic than a lot of books I've read. Keep up the amazing work author!