Having read all the author’s stories, I would like the main character to try to somehow gain immortality or longevity.The concept, history, dialogues - everything is good, but again: the same elves live 2-3 thousand years, and the average person in this world is less than 100.I wish the main character was a little more of a slut.And the very concept that a person from our world did not even learn magic when he got into the magical world is such an absurdity.Transfer the scenery from a fantasy world to a regular one - nothing will change.