The shadows of attraction - Reviews

"Fine, carry one then."

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The three of them finally answered Olympia, "Fine."

After a long time of closing my eyes I see my self in white room where all the place have is a old office worker sitting in his office looking at me, I was very excited because this situation is very familiar to me.

waiting for next?

"So that's it?" Qrow says to my back. "You won't even visit them?"

He was wearing pink and I was sure to see a knife in his hands. I ask my friends to accelerate and they see him to.We started to walk faster but he start running, he arrive nearby us and grab me before my friends can do anythings I feel something cold enter in my flesh and the pain was indefinable.

"Hm?" Noah hummed in confusion and turned towards Gengar, "You want me to take this little guy with me?"

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Good plot and the transition of the story is good too. Keep it up author ?.

when will it continue, I'm really curious ?

Before anyone make any reviews  let me make it first.First off, the novel "Adventures of the Ghost Man" is completely Afro-Centric with touches of Other cultures. Most of the adventures of Sol IbnuRa is in the Realms beyond Earth. The began with Earth and will end with Earth. I love what I am writing, even though it is hard. One of my greatest challenges in writing is English language. Since I am not English, I am still struggling with structuring my story. But so far, I have been doing well and I am not stopping till I reach the end.I hope you'll read my fictional Novel and pick meanings in it. Your reviews are highly welcomed. I am open to criticism and corrections.I hope one day, my novel would become the People's sensation .Thank you and remain blessed.SK John.