my honest review of this novel is that it has a lot of potential i came in thinking it was just gonna be a novel with 18 plus scenes every chapter but it isnt the beginning was the best part so far it started out slow and got into the power levels and different abilities and how the stats work which is very unique but i feel like the quality dropped when he came out the dungeon the author throws new enemies at us outta nowhere the power system seems all messed up like he can freeze the concept of levels how is that even possible i understand freezing time or space but levels and stats is absurd i think his eye is very underused he it can literally allow him to read minds and view their people lives so he should know there weaknesses and their fighting patterns yet he dosent do that and 1 of his lovers gets a "weaker" version of his time stop that allows her to be immortal to anyone but him and i dont like how the author throws enemies that are continental and have conceptual abilities at the palm of their hand at the mc i think author should just rewrite the whole novel as it has alot of potential just go slower dont make him automatically planetary and have the ability to fight beings millions of years older than him in 2 days worth of time
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