well written, just wished there was more background detail and character descriptions. at the moment the story seems...fine but I'm just waiting to see what will happen next. i do hope to see some more developments with the characters. i already like Adam and Serena(?) interesting characters, I do want more depth out of this. so far the story is beginning so I don't want to ask for too much. the writing is consistent and consise. I like the world you've written, zombies, factions and the game store. keep up the good work author. very unique idea also.