The Savage Mate - Reviews

They played football and at dinner they went inside. At 12 pm, Sky and Djason are still awake and laying on the bed. Everything is quitequite, until djason asks:'Can I see your human form sky? '

"You kids ran away, We were gonna have a fun time and sing songs... But it seems you need discipline.." John says as he walks towards the four

This control would be required when breaking through to foundation establishment stage. It wasn't something that cultivation techniques could impart. Disciples had to feel this control slowly from everyday use.

"Mother, we need to talk," Sasuke demands. Mio understandingly sits down to listen. "You can't adopt anymore children."

"queen bangun sayang sudah waktunya makan malam" aahh omah mah selalu saja mengganggu mimpi indah gua.

She shrugged. "Well, it's almost vacation and since it's sort of hot already, I told myself 'Why not?'. That's all."

~~~Flashback~~~

I thought ******* looked like another girl that wasn’t even that pretty, I definitely don’t remember her looks based on Erza. If anything considering how spoiled she is she should be modeled after Rias from DXD. Maybe I’m thinking to a different story similar to this one that changes the main female characters looks to other anime girls just like this author did.

In the hallway i see a man sitting on living room and he smiled at me.

The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.

The story is magnificent and characters are introduced and explained well. The world background is also excellent and the power system is interesting.I would give it a five star if not for the horrible punctuations. I mean yeah, it's just full stops and commas interchanged in most places, but that changes a lot and makes the read inconsistent I really hope it improves in the latter chapters because I'm giving my review at chapter 10.

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