The story has a lot of potential, and I'm enjoying the world and character development so far, however the pacing in the first nine chapters feels a bit slow, particularly due to the detailed synopsis, which reveals too much of the plot upfront. Thiss somewhat diminishes the element of surprise and makes it feel like the real story doesn’t begin until the pact with th primordial Chaos. Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes this…
