The rise of the pervert primordial - Reviews

~It is good, just one simple problem author, we need pic of characters for visualisation of story and stuff 'cough' segs 'cough' ..........,~

too cool mam too cool best primordial book......hats off to you the great author of this magnificent book.....your suck shall thrive on...you have my heartfelt blessings

I would like to have given this story a better rating but the author writes something that could be really fun and very enjoyable and instead it turns out to feel really, really drawn and dragged out.  Don't get me wrong it has some solid moments.  But those moments are vastly drowned out and over shadowed by things being drawn out.  For example:  There is a chapter that consists basically of just asking how a couple people slept that night.

I can handle things being slow paced but only if it feels natural in the writing.  In this case it just feels like things are being intentionally dragged along.  That said I will probably continue reading every now and then but it most certainly wouldn't be something I'd recommend to others.

I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.

story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro

harem harem. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. the story is awesome and there is some comedy

oh i just forgot to write a review to this one. .. this novel is good and the harem is nice, no one left or something like that. .. and im currently at chapter 382 or 362?